Monday, July 07, 2008

Horizon Hues

She stood next to him, leaning on the parapet wall overlooking the deep blue waters. Both of them kept their blank gazes focussed on the slithering silhouettes of the fish. She was conscious of his nearness, they were just short of touching. The fabric of his shirt and her duppatta were immersed in a playful revelry of their own. She was looking at him from the corner of her eye, when he suddenly turned to look at her full in the face. Startled, she looked away hastily but not before noticing a naughty glint in his eye. She felt like a thief caught red handed. Her mind raced trying to think of some small talk. He was about to say something, but stopped short of uttering the words. Unspoken thoughts lay saturated in the pink twilight mist.

Something had changed suddenly. Perhaps it had not been sudden, it had been creeping upon them slowly, stealthily. Only they had not noticed it. Or may be they had sensed it approaching but chose to ignore it? Thoughts and ideas had simply flowed between them unhindered. She knew his past and he knew her present. They had just woven their notions, opinions through the frontiers of time unfettered by emotions. There had been no confusion…until now? The skyline was turning grey.

Today was different. Why? A web was being woven and they seemed to be getting enmeshed. Feelings had entered silently, words that emerged from the mind took a detour through the heart and got lost at the lips. Silence loomed large. The horizon was tinged red.

He abruptly straightened himself. Folding his arms resolutely across his chest, he gazed beyond the horizon. Without looking at her, his voice barely above a whisper, “Its getting late. You better get back. I too have to leave. I’ll get you a cab “. He turned and started walking. For a moment, she stood looking at his receding figure, then wrapping her duppatta closely around her, she stepped forward, “Please don’t bother. I’ll take a rick. There’re a few waiting over there.”

She hurried ahead without a backward glance. The chill dusk was closing in. He turned back again to look at the blurred black skyline.

5 comments:

srijithunni said...

Hmm.. Ardra. That truly was a refreshing read. Just the moment and nothing beyond. The Silence makes it so magical. Well Writtten.

Good to see you back..!

Have Fun, Take Care and God Bless!

With Best Regards,
Srijith.

Ardra said...

thank you srijith.
warm rgds
ardra

ചീര I Cheera said...

:)

How r u?

kewlmallu said...

So - Are they falling in love?
Did they realize earlier - or just at this moment?
Is there anything that wud stand in their way?
How do they know each other - classmates? Co-workers? Met at the bus-stop?
what happens next ?
ARrrgghhh?
Thats the point ...isnt it..?

Ardra said...

xactly! :-) the reader is free to read the silences , interpret the unwritten words in any which way.